So here goes__
A Mixed Up Valentine (180 words)
Charlie Thomas carefully cut and pasted, glittered and
glued, wrote and colored. Then, he sat back and admired the valentine he’d made
for Rose. Charlie had adored Rose since Kindergarten, and every year he created a special card just for her.
When he finished admiring the card, he carefully placed it
on her desk and returned to his seat. Just then, Sam passed down that aisle. The breeze he created when passing caused the card to float to the
floor next to Jenny’s desk.
Jenny entered the class shortly afterwards and noticed what she thought was a note.
She picked it up, looked around, and decided it was for her.
Carefully she unfolded the heart shaped card and began to read. She smiled at
the signature that said__ Love Charlie.
Jenny had adored Charlie Smith since kindergarten. She
walked to Charlie’s desk, bent down so they were eye to eye, and hugged him
around his neck. Charlie turned bright red. He wasn’t sure why
Jenny had hugged him, but he had admired her since kindergarten, so he didn’t
mind at all.
I liek the way that worked out. =) Good luck!
ReplyDeleteFun, sweet story and a really like the ending! Good job!
ReplyDeletethanks Miss Kathy!
DeleteSweet story. Glad it had such a happy ending!
ReplyDeleteThanks.
DeleteFunny how things turn out sometimes. Cute story!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteThis story made me smile. Nothing like a hug around the neck.
ReplyDeletethanks Janie :0)
DeleteThat Charlie, admires and adores at will! Sweet story!
ReplyDeleteTwo different Chatrlies. That's why the latter was confused :0)
DeleteSweet ending, Aileen! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much :0)
DeleteFun story, Aileen.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteI love hugs. Cute story. I wish you well.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ms. Lynn
DeleteGreat twist in this story. Succinct and enjoyable to read. A true Valentine's Story. Well done Aileen. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so very much Miss Traci. That means a lot to me :0)
DeleteI know the feeling Charlie T and Charlie S - there were once three Cathy or Kathys living on the same floor. It gets confusing! Happy Valentiny!
ReplyDeleteThanks :0)
DeleteHooray for happy endings! Fun.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ms. Joanne :0)
DeleteHahaha! What a fun story, Aileen! How serendipitous that it all worked out! Clearly love was in the air :) Thanks so much for joining in the Valentiny fun!
ReplyDeleteThank you for hosting it once again :0)
Delete